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Lorna Hill
by Clarissa Cridland
[ The following is adapted from an article by
Clarissa Cridland published in 'FOLLY' issue 4,
September 1991. Used with the author's permission, with
thanks. ]
Lorna Hill was born in 1902, in
Durham City, England. She was educated at Durham Hill
School for girls and Le Manoir on the shores of Lake
Geneva, Switzerland. This was a finishing school at
Lausanne. Lorna obtained her BA at Durham University,
which is where she met her future husband, a clergyman.
They were married at Newcastle Cathedral and four years
later he was posted to a remote vicarage at Matfen, in
Northumberland. They now had a daughter, Vicki, and Lorna
played the organ on Sundays, ran the Sunday School and
carried out the many duties expected of a country vicar's
wife.
One day when Vicki was about ten,
she appeared with a story her mother had written at
school with a request that Mother write more stories
about 'Marjorie & Co. Lorna eventually penned
eight books for her daughter, illustrated by herself, and
that was when good fortune arrived in the shape of a
publisher's reader who happened to stay with the family
one weekend. He recommended an agent who sent the books
(as they were, in longhand, with Lorna's watercolour
illustrations) to a publisher, Art and Illustration. The
publisher wrote back, asking that she bring the other
seven books to London but Lorna replied that she couldn't
afford the train fare. They advanced her fifty pounds so
Lorna packed the books into her suitcase and off she
went. A & I typed 'Marjorie & Co for her and
published it in 1948, by which time Lorna had taught
herself to type, two-fingered style. Art and Illustration
went out of business before the final of the initial
eight stories, 'Castle in Northumbria', was published.
Harold Stark, the publisher, took the books with him to
Burke Publishing Co and later accepted the 'Patience'
series.
Flush with funds, the family
attended a performance of Alicia Markova and Anton Dolin
at Newcastle's Theatre Royal. They left, totally
entranced with ballet, Vicki deciding she wanted to be a
dancer. She enrolled at Sadler Wells (now the Royal
Ballet School) in London,. Lorna missed her so much that
she began to write books with a ballet background, the
first being 'A Dream of Sadler's Wells', published by
Evans Bros. Meanwhile, publishers Thomas Nelson, who had
lured Lorna away from Burke, republished the first three
'Marjorie' titles. This caused some confusion with those
published by Burke being called the 'Patience' books,
those by Nelson the 'Marjorie' books.
When both publishers dropped their
Children's series in 1964, Lorna having typed (still
using two fingers) forty books, Evans asked her to write
a biography on dancer Marie Taglioni. This became 'La
Sylphide'. Two adult novels followed from Robert Hale in
1978 but Lorna stopped writing following a couple of
serious operations. She passed away on August 17, 1991,
age 89.
The books in alphabetical order
A Dream of Sadlers Wells (Evans
1950)
Back-Stage (Evans 1960)
Border Peel (Art & Educational 1950)
Castle in Northumbria (Burke1953)
Dancer in Danger (Nelson 1960)
Dancer in the Wings (Nelson 1958)
Dancer on Holiday (Nelson 1962)
Dancer's Luck (Nelson 1955)
Dancing Peel (Nelson 1954)
Dress-Rehearsal (Evans 1959)
Ella at the Wells (Evans 1954)
It Was All Through Patience (Burke 1952)
Jane Leaves the Wells (Evans 1953)
La Sylphide, The Life of Marie Taglioni (Evans
1967) (biography)
Marjorie and Co (Art & Educational 1948)
Masquerade at the Wells (Evans 1952)
More About Mandy (Evans 1963)
No Castanets at the Wells (Evans 1953)
No medals for Guy Nelson (Nelson1962) |
Northern Lights (1999)
Principal Rôle (Evans 1957)
Return to the Wells (Evans 1955)
Rosanna Joins the Wells (Evans 1956)
So Guy Came Too (Burke 1954)
Stolen Holiday (Art & Educational 1948)Swan
Feather (Evans 1958)
The Five Shilling Holiday (Burke 1955)
The Little Dancer (Nelson 1956)
The Other Miss Perkin (Robert Hale 1978)
(romance)
The Scent of Rosemary (Robert Hale 1978)
(romance)
The Secret (Evans 1964)
The Vicarage Children (Evans 1961)
The Vicarage Children in Skye (Evans 1966)
They Called Her Patience (Burke 1951)
Veronica at the Wells (Evans 1951)
Vicki in Venice (Evans 1962) |
For ordering information on GGB
reprints, please go to http://www.rockterrace.demon.co.uk/GGBP
The books in series in reading order:
MARJORIE SERIES
1 Marjorie and Co (Art & Educational 1948)
2 Stolen Holiday (Art & Educational 1948)
3 Border Peel (Art & Educational 1950)
4 Northern Lights (privately pub. 1999)
5 Castle in Northumbria (Burke1953)
6 No medals for Guy Nelson (Nelson1962)
SADLERS WELLS SERIES
1 A Dream of Sadlers Wells (Evans 1950)
2 Veronica at the Wells (Evans 1951)
3 Masquerade at the Wells (Evans 1952)
4 No Castanets at the Wells (Evans 1953)
5 Jane Leaves the Wells (Evans 1953)
6 Ella at the Wells (Evans 1954)
7 Return to the Wells (Evans 1955)
8 Rosanna Joins the Wells (Evans 1956)
9 Principal Rôle (Evans 1957)
10 Swan Feather (Evans 1958)
11 Dress-Rehearsal (Evans 1959)
12 Back-Stage (Evans 1960)
13 Vicki in Venice (Evans 1962)
14 The Secret (Evans 1964)
|
PATIENCE SERIES:
1 They Called Her Patience (Burke 1951)
2 It Was All Through Patience (Burke 1952)
3 So Guy Came Too (Burke 1954)
5 The Five Shilling Holiday (Burke 1955)
DANCING PEEL SERIES
1 Dancing Peel (Nelson 1954)
2 Dancer's Luck (Nelson 1955)
3 The Little Dancer (Nelson 1956)
4 Dancer in the Wings (Nelson 1958)
5 Dancer in Danger (Nelson 1960)
6 Dancer on Holiday (Nelson 1962)
THE VICARAGE CHILDREN SERIES:
1 The Vicarage Children (Evans 1961)
2 More About Mandy (Evans 1963)
3 The Vicarage Children in Skye (Evans 1966)
Adult Books
La Sylphide, The Life of Marie Taglioni (Evans
1967) (biography)
The Scent of Rosemary (Robert Hale 1978)
(romance)
The Other Miss Perkin (Robert Hale 1978)
(romance) |
For ordering information
on GGB reprints, please go to http://www.rockterrace.demon.co.uk/GGBP
Northern
Lights -
publishing history
In September 1997, while visiting Lorna Hills
daughter Vicki, we were looking at the original exercise
books in which the Marjorie and Patience stories were
written, when we noticed the words Northern
Lights at the front of one of the books, among the
titles written. On enquiring, Vicki explained that this
was an unpublished book by her mother.
Northern Lights is the fourth Marjorie
title, coming after Marjorie and Co, Stolen
Holiday and Border Peel, and before Castle
in Northumbria and No medals for Guy. (Some
readers might be confused by our listing Castle in
Northumbria as a Marjorie book when publishers
listings in the 1950s and 1960s showed it to be a
Patience book. For various reasons, the publishers were
wrong. There are four Patience books only They
Called Her Patience, It Was All Through Patience,
So Guy Came Too and The Five Shilling Holiday.)
Northern Lights was written for Vickis
Christmas present in 1941, and is Lorna Hill writing at
her very best. The reason why it was never
published before is that it features the war, which the
other Marjorie titles dont, and by the time a
publisher had seen the books, in the late 1940s, the
British public were apparently tired of books about the
war. So, Northern Lights had languished in the
attic since then. We decided to publish it, and thus
complete Lorna Hills publishing opus.
- A & C
Veronica,
Sebastian, Guy and Jane art,
life, love and landscape
A Personal View of
"The Sadler's Wells" Series
by Jim Mackenzie. [ jmackenzie48@yahoo.com ]
The main virtue of series
literature for the reader is that, once the second or
third book is under way, the territory is familiar and
the boys and girls and men and women are old friends. We
are close enough to the characters to be able to
understand them and relax with them. To a certain extent
we are more deeply involved because we have their
interests at heart. After all, we bought or borrowed this
second book about these people because we liked the
first. We want to see what happens. Naturally this very
familiarity can also become the drawback and the same old
routine can become irritating rather than therapeutic,
intriguing or uplifting. The same repertoire of narrative
tricks, character foibles, closely described settings and
procedures, can be intolerable to both reader and writer.
Perhaps the reader has this effect deadened by the
passage of time, for most series emerge over a period of
years and much other reading intervenes before the next
in the line of sequels is available. The author is
usually afforded no such relief and often returns
immediately to the world which he or she has created. Two
temptations lie ahead: to rely too much on sure and safe
ground, or to try for risky innovation in order to
re-stimulate their own imagination.
I have included this preamble before I turn to a close
examination of Lorna Hill's very popular Sadler's Wells
series because I believe that it is a useful framework
for helping to assess this section of an important
children's writer's output. I hope to approach this task
in a spirit of positive detachment.
"Detachment" because I am male, had never read
any of the series up to three months ago, was neither pro
nor anti ballet as either an art-form or as a topic for
children's literature. "Positive" because last
year I read "Castle in Northumbria" (one of the
"Marjorie" series) and thoroughly enjoyed it.
My own claim to specialist knowledge with regard to Lorna
Hill concerns Newcastle Upon Tyne, Northumberland and the
North-East of England. For instance, I now know that I
attended the same university as Timothy Roebottom (See
"Rosanna Joins the Wells") but he was ten years
before my time. The books were read one after the other
with very little time intervening. Incidentally the
library system of Newcastle Upon Tyne held only four
"Wells" copies, which, I was assured, were
scarcely ever requested. To all intents and purposes
Lorna Hill is an "unknown" author even on her
own native heath. Why should this be so ?
The central characters must always be the first
consideration. Are they interesting ? Do they mature ? Do
they grow ?
The very first book, "A Dream of Sadler's
Wells", begins with a zest that promises well for
the rest of the series. To start in the middle of a
journey with someone in distress immediately engages our
attention and our sympathy. An intriguing meeting with a
self-confident "interesting rather than
good-looking" boy relieves the misery of fourteen
year old Veronica Weston's rail journey north to stay
with her relations in the wilds of Northumberland. All
readers will immediately know that the two young people
are destined to meet again. It's a first-person
narrative, of course, and perhaps the best section of the
whole book, indeed the whole series, occurs in chapters
two and three. I mean it as a compliment when I say that
it is like diluted "Jane Eyre", with the
penniless orphan, Veronica, subject to the whims of the
rather strange Scott family. The younger daughter,
Caroline, is fine, but, aged eleven, has little sway in
family matters. Uncle John is a remote business man who
disappears to his shipping office in Newcastle for most
of this and the subsequent volumes. Aunt June is a snob,
in the early books the worst example of the nouveau
riche, who has very fixed ideas about what Veronica
should and shouldn't do. This is quickly brought out by
her reaction when her strange niece offers to get out of
the Rolls Royce and open the gates for the chauffeur.
"Sit down, dear. Perkins will see to it."
And then there is Fiona, the older daughter. Fiona is
something else again. She is so awful that it is a joy to
read about her. Lorna Hill appears not to have given her
a single redeeming feature. She resents having to share
her room with Veronica and grumbles about the compromises
that people expect her to make.
"There isn't loads of room
.I hate having my
things all squashed together."
In fact Fiona's entire conversation appears to be
conducted in snaps and scornful comments. Her comment
about Jonathan's painting of Veronica shows you the
standard style and content of her part in the dialogue.
"Painted you ?" Fiona broke in scornfully.
"Whatever for ? Were you supposed to be a gipsy, or
a child of the gutter, or what ?"
For once we also have a character whose bite is as bad as
her bark. After describing Veronica's only dress as dirty
and "like something the cat's brought in" and
that it made her look like "the dog's dinner",
Fiona snatches it from her and tosses it into the bath
where the colours run and reduce it to a hideous mess.
Having made a bad start in the first story, it would seem
to be difficult for Lorna Hill to make the outwardly
attractive-looking Fiona any worse. However, as the
series unfolds, the spoiled and snobbish child becomes
the wilful and selfish young woman. Her own family having
fallen on hard times, she is prepared to jump ship and
join a family with better monetary prospects. From being
the tyrant of the schoolroom she grows into the mercenary
young woman who can declare as she prepares to get
engaged, "Love doesn't come into it. Love is only
something that you read about in fairy tales." In
fact, everything about Fiona is counter to the prevailing
spirit of the books, the essence of which is that
"Amor vincit omnia" or love conquers everything
even sometimes artistic ambition. Fiona's
appearance in the first book and her instinctive
selfishness and cruelty are therefore no accident. The
theme of selfishness and selflessness appears in many
guises during the course of the many books. When this is
linked with the concurrent idea of the demands of art
compared with the demands of life Lorna Hill finds her
firmest ground. This theme is sometimes explored through
the parent-child relationship but, given the high number
of orphans in her books, more often through the plots
which show young people growing up and falling in love.
What happens between Sebastian and Veronica is the
cornerstone of the first four volumes in the series. At
first sight, whilst Veronica, the girl whose
determination to reach the top in her chosen art-form and
who has talent to match her aspirations, is the ideal
heroine for young readers, there are many drawbacks to
Sebastian's personality. The world has moved on since the
1950's and many of his statements now appear even more
extreme than they did when they were first written. But
let us go back to the beginning and build up the picture
more carefully and remind ourselves that the narrative in
"A Dream of Sadler's Wells" and "Veronica
at the Wells" is told from the point of view of
Veronica. With the benefit of hindsight we can know that
Veronica marries Sebastian and that it is a happy
marriage. It makes sense, therefore, that any criticism
of Sebastian is withheld. It makes sense that Veronica,
not always the most astute of young ladies, (not
realising the exact depth of the relationship between
Jonathan and Stella, for example) should be unable to put
into words the nature of her love for Sebastian and her
understanding of his quixotic character
The crucial scene is, of course, the one that takes place
in the stable at Bracken Hall just after Veronica has
received the telegram about her first part in a
performance. In the excitement of the moment Veronica has
forgotten all about Sebastian's first concert. Her
imminent departure for London precipitates a crisis and
Sebastian says things that are difficult to forgive and
which appear to mark him down as a thorough male
chauvinist.
"Men are forced to have careers. Women don't have
to; they just barge into them. It's just silly for a
woman to give up everything friends, beauty sleep,
peace of mind even marriage for a stupid
thing like ballet."
Ironically, just as he treats her so badly, he pays her
an elaborate double compliment. She is the inspiration
that has driven him to write the music for the concert
that she must miss.
"How do you know I'm not playing for you, Veronica ?
How do you know I haven't written my Woodland Symphony
especially for you inspired by your grace, your
funny remote face, the lovely way you move
"
Then he presents her with the second half of the
double-edged compliment, a declaration of love and a
desire to kiss her that had been immediately withdrawn
when she chose to go to London instead of his concert.
Lorna Hill has presented the reader with a picture of a
talented but arrogant young man, confident in his own
talents, used to getting his own way by charm and force
of personality, genuinely in love with Veronica but
living in a world of self-centred expectations.
Veronica's rejoinder to Sebastian
"You're only a kid," I retorted. "We're
both kids."
"I'm almost seventeen," he answered
is also Lorna Hill's timely reminder to her readers that
Sebastian could be forgiven a little for his cruel words
eventually. He still has a lot to learn.
Sebastian never apologises to her and, indeed, seems to
expect that Veronica is the one that needs to seek
forgiveness. Fortunately for him Veronica, when she has
recovered from the shock and trauma of what happened,
understands. As she waits for her first performance of
Odette-Odile she reacts to the red roses he has sent,
"Just that ! No word of apology or good luck. I gave
a wry smile. How like Sebastian ! He hadn't a big,
generous nature like Jonathan. He was brilliant, and
witty, and arrogant. Above all, he was proud. No, he
would certainly never utter one word of apology to me or
to anyone else I was quite sure of that."
"No Castanets at the Wells" makes us look at
this relationship again from another direction. It is
another first-person narrative but this time it is told
from the point of view of Caroline, the more sympathetic
of Veronica's two cousins. In heated debate with Fiona,
the hated-one, Caroline tries to explain,
"Because he's a musician, and temperamental. They're
both temperamental," I said, trying to explain,
though I didn't really understand myself. "It may
seem odd to us, but it doesn't mean they don't love each
other." In fact we learn far more about Sebastian's
feelings after we know that he has come to claim Veronica
at the end of "Veronica at the Wells". Through
Caroline's story readers discover the extent of his
devotion and can recognise some stages of his growth. In
their conversation in the roof-garden of a
"well-known London store" he says,
"You're wondering about my quarrel with Veronica. It
was a very long time ago, that quarrel. I'm wiser
now." For a few seconds it looks like he is heading
towards humility but this is followed by,
"I'm not going to apologize to her, if that's what
you mean," said Sebastian, sticking out his chin,
"because I still consider she treated me
shamefully."
However, his instinctive sympathy for Caroline in her own
time of trouble, where he deals with her tenderly and
diplomatically, shows us that he has a heart after all. A
confidence from her brings spontaneously a confidence
from him. Indeed he even confides to her some of his
deepest feelings about Veronica,
"I'll tell you something I wouldn't tell another
living soul
.I'm going to become engaged to
Veronica."
And then the key words are said, "- if she'll have
me."
He talks of his first meeting with her "there's been
no one for me but Veronica ever since the very first day
I saw her funny little pale face in the Flying
Scotsman."
Lorna Hill manages to keep his dignity whilst exposing a
more loving side and then, with another narrative trick,
places him back in his enigmatic, half-joking and
half-arrogant character slot once again. The trick in
question is giving Sebastian the last word in Caroline's
tale by making him the narrator of the last section.
Naturally it is told in role and Sebastian reveals few of
his inner feelings apart from his continued dislike of
Fiona and her mother and his capacity for joking humour
that stops just short of a sneer. It would not be
Sebastian if he acknowledged his failings (or his deepest
feelings) or spared anyone from his sarcasm. However,
with a deft touch, the author brings out his love for
Veronica, who at this stage of their lives appears to be
clearly a better person than he will ever be. Her gesture
in kissing Fiona and acting as a peace-maker confirms
what Lorna Hill has been asserting all along,
"Madame says that if your thoughts aren't nice, it
shows in your dancing, just as it does in music or
painting."
This recurring idea is best developed through the
character of Toni Rossini who gives unselfishly to his
partner. Veronica recognises this and says so, "I
don't believe you ever thought of yourself at all."
His reward is to have his own performance transformed by
his generosity of spirit,
"Yet the strange thing was that when he danced as my
partner, people said he was like another person
that his dancing reached heights that no one believed him
capable of attaining."
Alas for our heroine, Veronica, a moral message is best
delivered, not just through the characters we love to
hate, but also through the suffering and painful
self-realisation of the character that the reader has
been led to like and admire. Lorna Hill is courageous
enough to show that her prima ballerina assoluta also has
feet of clay, albeit this fall from grace is a temporary
one and kept at the sideline of the later stories. Both
she and Sebastian do not reach the end of their story
after three volumes, in spite of their material success
and fame. Nemesis arrives in the shape of Vicki, their
talented, wilful and charming daughter. Briefly Veronica
does an Irma Foster. In other words she refuses to
believe that her daughter can do anything other than
follow in her footsteps. Beneath a sarcastic exterior, no
doubt inherited from her father, Vicki can't bear to
break the heart of her mother and pursue her own dreams.
It is one of the reasons why Jon falls in love with her.
Events are brought to a climax in "Dress
Rehearsal" where Vicki presents Nona as her
replacement,
"Will you adopt Nona, and let her do all the things
you have dreamed up for me ?"
Strangely enough it is Sebastian who shows perception and
sympathy before Veronica,
"Fathers sometimes understand their daughters better
than mothers do."
Veronica herself is prepared to confess,
"I've been thinking lately that perhaps I've been
too much Veronica Weston, and not enough Mrs. Scott !
Someone told me that my only daughter was often
lonely
"
When Vicki tries to find excuses for her parents,
"Oh, Mama not self-centred !" exclaimed
Vicki, horrified. "Let's say single-minded."
it is Sebastian who insists upon the truth,
"Which is a more polite way of saying the same thing
!"
"Dress Rehearsal" is the eleventh in the
Sadler's Wells series and yet Lorna Hill is still finding
ways in which to show that learning is a life-long
process. The series has been launched well and we can
already see that Lorna Hill can use these central
characters as yardsticks for the future behaviour of the
succeeding heroines and heroes. Veronica and Sebastian
may be kept on the periphery of the action but they still
serve a useful purpose and the reader is still interested
in their fate. Such are the essentials of a series
format.
And yet I fear there is no blinking the fact that after
the first five books the series falls away in standard.
By the sixth book the reader is deeply integrated into
the habits, manners and mores of two communities : the
world of the north-east of England and the world of
Sadler's Wells. But by the sixth book the reader has
begun to realise that the heroines are like runners in a
relay race, passing the baton of artistic striving from
one generation to the next or falling by the wayside:
from Veronica to Jane to Ella to Rosanna to Sylvia to
Nona. By the sixth book the reader will realise that a
young man will come along and that the girl will have to
make a choice. What supports the reader through the rest
of the books is the tapestry of familiar people and
familiar places that has already been woven and which can
act as a backdrop to the increasingly familiar
story-lines. They really are old friends and old
acquaintances and, in some cases, like that of Nigel and
Fiona, old enemies. However, by the seventh book,
"Rosanna Joins the Wells", the author has lost
her instinctive grip over the power of narrative. It was
already slipping somewhat in "Ella at the
Wells" which was her second "Wells"
venture into third person perspective. But, before I
identify what I consider to be the short-comings, let me
outline more clearly what was achieved in the opening
quartet and comment in some detail on what was perhaps
the peak of her achievement in the controversial
"Jane Leaves the Wells".
As has already been said, the first two books offer us
Veronica's perspective on the world. Lorna Hill stays
resolutely inside the character and there are no
authorial comments. We experience at first-hand the
struggles, the cruelties, the joy of success and the
pangs of love. Lorna Hill even manages to convince us of
the love of the countryside that transforms both
Veronica's attitude to Northumberland and her capacity
for bringing feeling to her dancing roles. Choosing to
move the next stage of the story through Caroline's
narrative in "No Castanets at the Wells" was
also a tremendous idea. Caroline's struggles as she comes
to terms with her failure at the Wells are interesting in
themselves but the insight given into Sebastian, Veronica
and Fiona deepens our understanding of their characters
in a part of the story that we already know. Sebastian's
post-script where he "finishes the story" is
another daring attempt to use the narrative form in an
interesting way. The twin narratives of Jane and Mariella
who swop their lives extends this innovative approach to
storytelling into "Masquerade at the Wells".
Jane's story of her transformation from the bullied
victim to splendid success at the Wells heavily outweighs
Mariella's contribution of course. Yet Mariella's
"finishing" of the story of Jane's success is
also a prelude to a more detailed account of her own
story in "Jane Leaves the Wells" where Lorna
Hill resorts successfully to the third person narrative
for the first time. What makes "Jane Leaves the
Wells" such a success, in spite of the missing inner
perspective, is a combination of both a judicious
selection of content and the way in which the author
conveys a tremendous sense of place. Nevertheless, in a
way, with the exception of a few minor developments, this
book really completes all that Lorna Hill has got to say
about the conflicting demands of ballet and of love. The
rest of the series would seem to be outings with old
friends going to familiar places no matter how much she
tries to push unconvincingly into the world of the slums
or the palaces.
To return to "Jane Leaves the Wells", it is
quite clear that Mariella left the Wells in the previous
book. Her affection for the rural life which for a while
is bound up with her infatuation with Nigel is subtly
contrasted with Jane's total absorption in the ballet and
the appeal of her dancing partner Josef Linsk. That both
the heroines are vulnerable to the outward charm of
basically selfish people is placed constantly before the
reader. There are other ironies as well. Mariella sees
clearly what Josef is like and Jane knows only too well
what a hateful person Nigel can be. The other contrasts
lie in their surroundings, and here we can see clearly
this author's ability to both evoke environments and
integrate their special quality into the events so that
they are more than mere landscapes and become at times of
symbolic importance. Though, to a certain extent, Lorna
Hill creates a special feeling of place in each of her
Wells novels (Who could forget the particular place that
the lake in the grounds of Bracken Hall holds in the
hearts of Sebastian, Veronica and Caroline ?) the
landscapes and the people in "Jane Leaves the
Wells" are particularly well-drawn and are worthy of
a closer examination and contain in effect the essence of
the whole book.
Mariella's love of the countryside is not merely a stated
thing. It is explored constantly by reference to her
reaction to the beauty that surrounds her. The
description of the new schoolteacher's cottage with its
square of grass and its rigid lines of lobelia reflecting
the unbending attitude of Miss Goodall, is contrasted
with Mariella's memory of the cottage as it used to be
a riot of colours and shapes.
"The house certainly hadn't been tidy then. In fact,
it had been nearly hidden under masses of rambler roses,
virginia creeper and ivy. A clematis, with purple flowers
the size of plates, sprawled over the porch, and flowers
of all colours shapes and sizes jostled each other in
untidy flower-beds, and nodded in at all the
windows."
The "perfect lines" so striven after in ballet
and achieved by the domineering schoolmarm now made the
cottage stand "like a policeman, directing the
traffic." Inside the cottage of Mariella's memory
there had been the mixture of the beautiful and the
tasteless that makes up real life.
"Inside there were flowers everywhere: roses in the
front room, spilling out of a hideous china vase with
"A Present from Blackpool" on it, lupins in a
cracked water-jug in the tiny hall, and jam jars filled
with buttercups all over the kitchen."
A laburnum tree which had stood near the gate was
ruthlessly cut down by Mrs. Goodall's jobbing gardener
but remained in Mariella's mind as "a huge golden
umbrella."
This long description is used by the author to
re-establish Mariella's sensitivity and is then followed
by one of a series of seasonal pictures of Northumberland
that place her on harmony with the landscape.
"She rode slowly up the road. It was very quiet. The
long rides of the fir-wood to her left were filled with
deep blue misty shadows, the cobwebs hung their jewelled
nets on every bush, and tall fronds of bracken on the
north side of the road, where the sun never shone,
sparkled with hoar frost. It was a lovely autumn day,
perfect as only autumn days in Northumberland can be.
There was a wide grass verge to the road, and her horse's
hoofs made no noise on the springy turf. Apart from a
slight creaking of leather as she swayed easily in the
saddle, there wasn't another sound. Even the cushats in
the wood had stopped cooing, now that autumn had
come."
It is a picture of Mariella at one with the sights,
sounds and textures of the landscape. In the words of the
old hymn, "Where every prospect pleases and only man
is vile." As if on cue, Nigel arrives and splits the
almost perfect silence with his "View Halloo".
On re-reading the book one is struck constantly by the
number of pictures we are given of Mariella at home with
the landscape and with the people of this large border
county : Mariella waiting in vain for Nigel in the
country inn, Mariella in the village post-office,
Mariella feeding Lady Monkhouse's hens, Mariella setting
off to visit the old lady who lives in the old cottage up
on the moors, Mariella at the fox-hunt, Mariella at the
gymkhana, Mariella sharing with Veronica their delight in
their natural environment
"Oh, look at the lake ! Isn't it beautiful in the
winter sunshine, and the frost sparkling on the fir trees
? You're right, Mariella, nowhere could be quite as
beautiful as this."
But Mariella's problem is that Nigel too has a
superficial beauty that holds her affections in spite of
the many imperfections of his character. Moreover
Mariella's own beauty of appearance and goodness of
character (constantly both explicitly stated and
plausibily demonstrated) are either ignored or abused.
Lorna Hill will not resolve Mariella's problem in this
volume of the series her heroine is not yet ready
to see that beauty lies in the crags of character as well
as in the surface smoothness of a man who possesses a
figure like "a Greek god."
Lorna Hill's creation of Jane's world at the ballet is
done differently. The book begins in the middle of a
dialogue between the female members of the corps de
ballet and Jane who has become one of the principal
dancers. Long term reflections on the life of the dancer
are mingled with both kind and cruel comments about their
fellow artistes and mundane matters such as eating,
drinking and boyfriends. Jane's transformation from the
young girl suffering from a cold to the fairytale
princess shows her dedication to her art and this is
certainly what strikes the reader on first perusal.
However, a second look suggests another line of thought
and it is the rather surprising one of artificiality and
not art. From, "Look out, Daphne ! You know you're
not supposed to sit in Carabosse's carriage, even if it
is only an old soap-box !" to the description of
Josef "He was a consummate artist at make-up,
was Josef, and he had taken good care to accentuate his
best features his glittering dark eyes, and his
thinly bridged nose with the sensitively curving
nostrils." Lorna Hill is making it clear that it is
a world riddled with falsity and pretence.
Take also Jane's mistake about which reporter was Mrs.
Coggan's son and we can see the whole idea of the
superficial and the true being pursued indirectly. When
Jane insists upon "ordinary" potatoes and a
straightforward peach and Lorna Hill talks of her
"shedding her own personality and becoming a
fairy-tale princess" there are signs being planted
that the world of ballet is not her ultimate destiny. The
fad for fashion which the author explores in the next
chapter leads to the comment, "Yes, ballet dancers
are simple, naïve people" and to the conclusion
that is not meant as a compliment. It is a shame that the
cleverly constructed chapter is spoiled by the clumsy and
"corny" device of having George, the stage-door
keeper, remark in god-like rhetorical tones about the
awful Josef,
"Dance with him, miss, by all means," he
muttered to the empty air. "But don't you go
a-marrying him, that's all ! Don't you go a-doing it !
He's not the right young man for a sweet missie like you
!"
Unfortunately this sort of stage-whisper from the author
to nudge (nay kick) her readers into the right way of
thinking is the sort of thing that starts to dominate the
next few stories in the series.
Much better handled is the scene of reunion with her
parents and Mariella as she returns to the north. Jane's
sensitive perceptiveness is revealed in her thoughts
about Newcastle Central Station.
"Imagine all the meetings and parting that have
taken place on this very platform."
However, there is a new core of self-belief that allows
her to tell her mother just what she thought about the
pony that she was landed with when she was a child. She
is also defiant about the cruelty that is involved in
providing young ladies with fur coats and she stands by
her principles. More than that she is prepared to be
outspoken about her feelings about Nigel when she talks
to Mariella about the projected journey to Scotland. This
is a new Jane who has already embarked upon the path of
character formation and is about to face the more
important journey of actually growing up. Marriage looms.
However, the chosen young man is Guy Charlton . Readers
of Lorna Hill's other books will already know that there
are at least three problems with Guy that complicate the
issue of a straightforward romance. Firstly Guy is almost
perfect he is kind, considerate, honest, patient
(most of the time) and possesses both immense physical
and moral courage. Should I add that he is rich and
talented, at home with animals both as a consummate rider
and as a caring vet ? Thus he is either too good to be
true or, perhaps, too good for Jane. Secondly there is a
legacy from the "Marjorie" stories that
conflicts with the facts in the "Wells" series.
At one time Guy was clearly destined to partner Esme, and
Lorna Hill's portrayal of their romance is considered to
be one the best parts of those "younger" tales.
It is impossible to dislike Esme and yet now there is
Jane. Finally, inflicting corporal punishment on young
girls who misbehave i.e. a good spanking on the bottom as
in "Castle in Northumbria", must always cause
the reader to stop and think twice about the author's
obvious love for her favourite man.
Even before this unusual romance unfolds, Guy and Jane
are united by their separate memory of a past episode
from Jane's childhood (recorded in "No Castanets at
the Wells") when Guy rescued her from the pig-headed
cruelty that comes to be the hallmark of Nigel's
behaviour. The reader also knows (though Jane doesn't)
from Caroline's account how Guy intervened to stop Fiona
stealing the role of Titania from Jane with her lies to
Lady Blantosh. Guy is fair and honest in all of his
dealings but the author, in spite of the disappearance of
Esme, is showing us that quite early on he had a special
consideration for Jane. In order for the romance to
blossom, Guy has to become a little less sure of himself
and Jane has to gain more in confidence. Above all, they
have got to be ready to obey the underlying principle of
all the Wells books which is that the people who give
generously of themselves are rewarded even when
the giving consists of allowing the prospective partner
the freedom to escape. By the opening of "Jane
Leaves the Wells" both are ready for a new
relationship and Lorna Hill is very careful in the way
that she handles the details of their gradual union. And
the landscape plays a big part in the way that she does
it. Her first tactic is to move away from the two
familiar territories of the ballet and the Northumbrian
countryside and place the crucial parts of the action in
Scotland.
The precision with which the journey to Scotland is
described makes is possible for any so-inclined reader to
trace the route on the map. Everything in this part of
the book is going to be just right. Unlike the first
person narratives which often remain coy or discrete
about the emergence of feelings and the declaration of
love, this third-person account lays bare every telling
detail. Gradually, on the epic journey in the car through
the snow and the rain, it emerges that both Guy and Jane
are caring and generous people. At every stage of the
trip Guy considers the comfort and good spirits of
Mariella and Jane. In the latter stages Jane
spontaneously offers the fractious Fiona her dance dress.
Other people, including Fiona, Nigel and Josef, behave
churlishly and the affinity of Jane and Guy is thus made
even more clear.
However, the real story belongs to the mountains. The
climbing of Ben Cruachan by Guy and one of the subsidiary
peaks in the range by Jane is not just the physical means
of bringing the two young people together. It is redolent
of hints about the nature of their developing
relationship and of what is to happen to their lives.
Guy's thorough preparations for his day's climbing are
contrasted with Jane's impatient ignorance and
impetuousness. It would be "fun" to meet him at
the top. She sets off ridiculously ill-equipped for the
expedition and inevitably places herself in real peril.
There is a moment before the dangers become apparent when
she feels she has made it to the top.
"Peak after peak appeared for one brief moment, and
then vanished like ghostly giants from another world, and
between them and Jane lay a deep and dangerous gulf that
even she, in her inexperience, knew she could never cross
from this point."
The parallels with her own career in ballet are
irresistible. The gala performance is but the false top
the minor peak that lies below the achievements of
the likes of Veronica. Oscar Devereux, the wily old
critic, knows that Jane's chance has come too soon and
later the author comments,
"You see, he knew Jane intimately, and he knew that
her character was soft and affectionate, that it lacked
the steel thread that must run through a ballerina's
nature if stardom is to be reached and sustained."
Guy's rescue of Jane has all the ingredients that are
required for the selflessness that is required from a
partner. He surrenders his coat, his gloves, his food
and, perhaps more importantly, a little bit of his old
self some time later as they sit in the safety of his
car. He settles in to deliver one of his usual
tellings-off but is defeated by the affection that he
feels for her. Even his threat of a spanking comes across
as an empty one and, despite her apparently meek
response, his attention has focused on the spirit with
which she extracts a promise from him that they will
climb the mountain together.
Jane has always hated horses and vowed never to ride one
when she gained adult years. When Guy drives to Edinburgh
and reveals that he has booked two mounts for them to
ride her heart sinks in depression and apprehension. Yet,
for the sake of Guy, she forces herself to go through
with the ride. Once again she is prepared to give and, to
her surprise, she suddenly finds that she is the
beneficiary. Guy understands. Guy makes sure that it will
be alright. He believes that he is introducing her into
her natural heritage,
"It's such a lovely pastime, and, being a
Northumbrian, you ought to love it !"
The world of ballet falls suddenly away.
"It was when she was changing back into her ordinary
clothes that she realized with a shock of surprise that
for a whole afternoon she had never once thought of the
Wells."
Yet it is too soon to allow her to leave. To turn to Guy
when she is injured and defeated would be to leave the
reader with a poor opinion of her courage and
determination. She is still growing up, still discovering
things about herself and the world of ballet. Her opinion
of Josef Linsk is now clear.
"I only loved his dancing, and was flattered by the
pretty things he said. I know now that he's not nice,
really, and doesn't mean the things he says. He says them
to every girl he meets !"
Earlier in the chapter she had discovered the
unintentional cruelty of the profession she has chosen
when she sees how the audience reacts to Vivien Chator
dancing the part that should have been hers.
"Oh, the flattering, worshipping, fickle audience !
How quick it is to acclaim, and how quick to forget
!"
Even then her essential honesty makes her admit of her
rival, "I believe Vivien Chator is quite a nice
girl."
Guy's warmth in his conversations on the telephone, his
friendliness in coming all the way to Edinburgh just to
see her, and his commitment in actually being prepared to
admit that this was the sole reason for his journey
cannot help but begin to have an affect upon her. This is
special treatment and it is offered not because she is
Jane Foster, the ballerina. Eventually it is clear to
Jane that he really loves her and that his love is worth
having. Even the manner of Guy's proposal shows the care
with which Lorna Hill has constructed this part of the
book. He chose Princes Street because he thought the
noise and confusion would ease the tension for Jane. His
preferred scenario was entirely different but let us
leave that for the moment and deal with his refusal.
"I'm in love with the stage, and with the ballet
!" she declares.
Guy doesn't try to reason with her or persuade her. It
would be like trying to imprison a butterfly. He offers
to wait if she ever changes her mind and declares that he
understands. His behaviour is both kind and dignified.
His feelings for her are clear and complete; Jane's
feelings for him are still in turmoil. The confusion is
only exacerbated by her worries about her chances for a
complete recovery from her foot injury and then the
opportunity to take the leading role. Lorna Hill
expresses these feelings through the medium of a dream in
which Jane fears that Guy will not arrive in time to
rescue her from a precipice on Ben Cruachan. She wakes
from the dream and confesses to her Aunt Irma that she
loves Guy dearly.
"But of course it's no use no use at all
my loving him. I'm a dancer."
Aunt Irma, the last person to understand Jane's true
nature, merely confirms this view of the priorities of
life.
"When ballet comes in at one's door, love must
perforce fly out at one's window
."
When we consider Irma's earlier treatment of Mariella,
which amounted almost to emotional neglect, the
consequences of which we are reminded again in the very
next chapter, you realise that she is the last person
Jane should choose as a confidante. Her views should
carry little weight in the eyes of the readers. However,
from the point of view of dramatic tension, they help to
illustrate the conflicting forces now pulling at Jane.
Even Veronica's indisposition so that Jane gets her
unexpected chance for stardom is not due to ill health or
injury but to another interesting conquest of life over
art that is cleverly used to echo the main story. The
dedicated, divine and unmatchable Veronica is having a
baby and Jane comments that her performance in rehearsal
was more than usually inspired. In the end, however,
Veronica's place must be taken by Jane so that her
destiny can be fulfilled in more ways than one. The
glitter of Sadler's Wells is about to be at its
brightest.
Nevertheless, suddenly the author switches the story back
to Northumberland and Mariella's continuing problems with
Nigel. Amidst the details of his selfishness and her
yearning for some return of the love she feels, Mariella
muses on what has happened to Jane. In view of her own
unhappiness, her conclusions on Jane's success are worth
recording,
"All the same," thought Mariella, cantering
smoothly along the grass verge of the country road,
"I'd rather be up here in Northumberland where it's
quiet, and yes, sane where there are real things
to do, like riding, and planting out the wall-flowers,
and learning how to cure sick animals. Less glamorous,
perhaps, but more satisfying !"
The description of Jane's gala performance is carefully
constructed so that all the underlying themes of the book
are brought into focus for one last time. The description
of the audience in its glamour and beauty and the
reminder that the occasion is enhanced by the presence of
royalty apparently begins to encourage us in to the
belief that this is Jane's destiny. Her performance as
Odette and the way she conquers the people in the theatre
continues this feeling. Then Oscar Devereux's deflating
comments on her Odile demonstrate that her success is
partly illusion.
"To be brutal it was insipid. She did not fill the
stage."
Jane herself has begun to find the whole occasion unreal.
There was a "dream-like quality" about it all
and she couldn't believe that it really Jane Foster who
has performed. What comes to her mind is Guy's face and
what comes to her heart is "a little ache in her
heart that surely ought not to be there."
Lorna Hill takes care to let us know that the audience
are no longer beautiful they are "lavishly
dressed". They may be enthusiastic and charmed but
they are not "knowledgeable". Jane's mind
dwells not on her triumph but the distressing words that
she had heard after rehearsal that very afternoon. In the
opinion of her peers, her fellow dancers, she was
"adequate, but just not top grade, and never will
be." Her vision of the future if she stays within
the world of ballet is revealed to be both tawdry and
slightly preposterous and culminates in an image of the
once handsome Josef covering his baldness with a wig.
As Jane puts it to herself, "She was on the top of
the highest peak.." but just like her adventure on
the lower hills of the range by Loch Awe she realises
there were still other mountains that she could not
climb. The understanding is that, in contrast, Veronica
touched the stars. It is better to have a world where you
can keep on climbing and not one where you are "over
the hill".
This takes us back to Guy's proposal in Princes Street
and what he would have said if they had been ready to
dedicate themselves to each other. What he wanted was
that their declaration and commitment to each other
should take place on the top of Ben Cruachan so that
their "promise would be solemn and binding, made, as
it was, in the very heart of the hills." When she
sends her telegram it means that Guy and Jane will climb
Ben Cruachan together and it will be a symbol of how they
will approach their future life together. The country
that lies ahead is challenging but also real and
permanent. His love as yet may be stronger than hers but
the book has shown us that she has courage and
determination as well as a "soft and
affectionate" character.
It is this reader's opinion that Lorna Hill was never
herself to reach such heights again. There are many
virtues in the remaining stories and there are many
"old friends" amongst the characters and some
charming new ones yet to meet but never again does she
catch so well her characters at the point of ripening
into adulthood and self-realisation, nor does she present
as successfully the conflicting demands of art and human
love. From now on some of the backgrounds jar the
Ruritanian world of Leopold and his pursuit of Ella is
demonstrably false and the unrelieved awfulness of the
lower classes as depicted in her vision of the mining
village of Blackheath smacks of snobbery. They were
attempts at innovation but her realisation of the details
lacks the conviction that she brings to the milieu with
which she was most at home the doings of the rural
gentry and the middle class. And occasionally the plots
falter so that the readers are given the sudden
telescoping of years of life so that summary takes the
place of effective scene depiction. Also, depressingly,
there is the outrageous padding of "Return to the
Wells" when overwhelming details of the Swiss
countryside add little or nothing to the emotional
validity of the action. How unlike the careful
integration of characters, action and setting that we
have seen in "Jane Leaves the Wells" ! Worst of
all, perhaps, is the feeling that Lorna Hill, in spite of
her forays into the world of kings and princesses, is now
playing safe. Again and again you are met by reassurances
that one day the heroine will be in the midst of success.
You long for an editor that would have told her to let
the readers find out for themselves and one that would
have been bold enough to ensure that the titles in the
middle of the series did not give away the eventual
conclusion - such as happens with "Rosanna Joins the
Wells."
The quality of the first five books sustains the whole
series. The reader is hooked and, in spite of my
reservations, there are still some gems to be uncovered
in the later books Vicki's journey with Nona, the
awful attack on Sylvia, the discomfort of nasty Nigel and
many others. And, if you enjoyed the Wells series, there
are still two further directions you can travel with this
author. The "Dancing Peel" series will take
back to the world of ballet and the "Marjorie"
and "Patience" series will return you to the
world of children. I have no hesitation in saying that I
prefer the latter alternative. #
Castle in Northumbria
Reviewed by Jim
Mackenzie [ jmackenzie48@yahoo.com ]
Just what is the essence
of a writer's appeal, the magic that draws the readers
into the world of fiction, holds them there for a while,
and then releases them back into the real world
entertained, diverted and sometimes uplifted ? Which is
it plot? characters ? setting ? theme ? What makes
a good children's book ? When it comes to a children's
series what are the ingredients that sustain you through
the different stories, through the good plots and the
bad, that make you want to find out what happens next ?
How can a writer use the assets of familiarity,
inevitable in a series, and offset them against the
drawbacks of repetition and the improbability of further
adventures ? Most of us eventually realise that we are
all entitled to one great adventure in our life: growing
up, leaving home, falling in love, marriage, having
children, but how can we, even as young readers, tolerate
so many incidents happening to the same select group ? Is
it because we want them to happen ?
It is thus in a spirit of
honest enquiry that I look more closely at "Castle
in Northumbria" by Lorna Hill, an author whose
popularity appears to be again on the increase. At the
time of writing this article it is the only book by this
author that I have read and so all my deductions and
evidence are drawn from this text. Doubtless there will
be Lorna Hill experts who can tell me more. I look
forward to hearing from them.
Let's start with first
principles: I enjoyed this book. As I am neither young
nor female then I am going to presume that there are
factors in the book that depend neither on the naivety
nor the gender of the reader. "Castle in
Northumbria" is clearly one in a series as
references are freely made to other adventures in other
places. I hope to read them some day and I certainly
could consult a bibliography, but that is not the point
of this particular exercise. Let it stand on its own
merits.
It is definitely a lost
world, an age of innocence that can never come back. The
boys in this story range from a twelve year old, Toby, to
Guy, who is nearly sixteen. The girls in the story are
nearly all fourteen and the friendships and relationships
between the sexes depicted here just could not happen any
more. I seriously doubt if they could have done at the
time (early 1950's). However, as we shall discover, that
is really a part of the fascination of the book. There is
also a strong class perspective with most of the
participants belonging to public schools and being pretty
well off. (They each own their own pony and a chauffeur
drives them to their camp at the castle.) There is a
clear line of demarcation between these children and the
people of the village, though, to be fair to the author,
her central characters nearly always behave impeccably
and are rarely patronising. Any one who is
"stuck-up" is usually given very short shrift
by the others.
Anyway, to start with the
plot - nothing much happens but, in some ways, everything
happens. There are no hidden passages, no dastardly
villains, no natural disasters, no sudden revelations, no
arduous journeys, no real moments of self-discovery, and,
in this book at least, no falling in or out of love. It
reminds me of the comment of the Scottish lady who went
to see a Chekov play, "There wasn't much action but
I do feel I know everyone so much better."
|
Judith,
wearing Marjorie's dress. She is about to be the
May Queen. |
|
Pansy,
the narrator of the story. |
Basically, to sum it
all up, five children go away camping during the Easter
holidays under the walls of an old castle in
Northumberland and they meet two other girls of differing
personalities with whom they interact in both a positive
and negative fashion. The children quarrel with each
other, forgive each other, ride their ponies, get soaked
in a night-time storm and witness a May Queen procession.
It sounds a pretty tame string of events, doesn't it ?
However, I have missed two vital ingredients: firstly the
almost entire absence of important grown-up characters
and, secondly, the ebb and flow of feelings that surround
Marjorie and her uneasy relationship with Guy. In fact it
would be possible to identify a line of development that
tracks Marjorie's misbehaviour and how Guy attempts to
deal with it. And herein lies one of the strengths of the
book the plot does not strain the reader's
credulity with the usual time-worn devices of children's
adventures. Lorna Hill concentrates on the interplay
between the characters of the children and does not look
outward for artificial excitements.
Yes, it's the characters
that matter. Surely the only worthwhile test of the
personalities of the children is whether we want to meet
them again as old friends in the next book in the series.
And it is Marjorie who matters the most for she is the
problem child. She is vain; she is foolish; she can be
cruel and she is certainly selfish. Yet the other
children still seem to like her and remain friends with
her to the end. Even Guy, her greatest adversary, doesn't
want her to go back to school still carrying a grudge for
the way in which he has treated her. Marjorie is the fly
in the ointment, the spanner in the works, the creator of
tension and unpleasantness, the one who sets the reader's
teeth on edge. She is the tempted one in the Garden of
Eden. In contrast Guy is almost infuriatingly God-like.
His well of common-sense is never plumbed, his patience
is almost of Job proportions, his determination is
rock-solid, his courage undoubted and his punishments
swift, brutal and fair. His forgiveness and kindness are
also clearly to be seen. He is almost a model young man.
On a second reading of the book I was pleased to find a
few faults with him. In particular his persecution of the
tender-hearted Esme over her use of American and slang
terms is revealed to be arbitrary, for he finds it
acceptable for boys to use them. He also comes across as
a bit of a bully in the nicest possible way.
Now we had better deal
with the part of the book that would be the strangest and
most unacceptable to a modern audience. When Marjorie is
revealed as a liar who had no real permission to be on
the holiday, when she shows her cruel streak by swishing
poor Thomas' pony with a hazel switch, when she stays out
all night, leaving the others what amounts to a suicide
note, when she wants to disappear on a date to the cinema
in Hexham to see an unsuitable film with an unsuitable
young man, it seems reasonably fair that she should be
punished. What is unexpected is that Guy's punishment is
to put her over his knee and give her bottom a good
spanking with his rubber-soled sand-shoes ! Remember she
is fourteen and he is only nearly sixteen. However,
"The spanking really did seem to have improved
Marjorie, or at any rate to have subdued her, and she
managed to behave quite decently."
In the context of the book Marjorie can eventually
forgive the humiliation of her treatment because of her
greater need to belong to the Clan, as the children have
styled themselves. Already the theme of the book is
intruding into this account without my meaning it to.
It's best illustrated through the character of Pan. Pan
(or Pansy Pierce) is the narrator of the story and a
pretty self-effacing one at that. It is another part of
the fascination of the book that you don't notice this
important personality who shapes our view of events until
you take a second look. However, the childish game of
Fugs and Tecs at the Thankless house suddenly sharpens
our perspective on both the character herself and the
morality by which the children are endeavouring to live.
Lorna Hill allows us to see how Pan is affected by both
compassionate justice and the workings of her conscience.
Pan's crime is two-fold.
She strays into a part of the house that has been put out
of bounds and then she lies about why she did so. The
incident soon passes off amongst other events, but not
for Pan:
"The lie I had told weighed heavily on my
conscience, so much so that it cast a cloud on everything
even the tea."
She confesses her sin. She tries to explain her feelings
about being hunted and how it amounts to almost a phobia.
The splendid Esme is soon ready to forgive Pan but by now
the reader knows that it is Guy's opinion that matters.
"Well, you realise, I suppose, that you've let
the Clan down," Guy said slowly, but his voice
didn't sound nearly so cold. "Broken two of its most
important rules told a lie and disobeyed orders.
You'll have to atone for that, you know."
Pan longs for punishment, for after punishment it will be
over. The others decide that she must wash all the supper
things and remain silent all during the meal. It doesn't
sound particularly hard but Lorna Hill suddenly
illustrates the deep friendship of the community of
friends by the behaviour of the others.
"When I had cleared away the supper things and
had taken them over to the trough where we usually washed
up, I found that there weren't so very many after all.
Esme had made one plate do instead of the usual two, and
so had Guy, whilst Tony stirred his tea with his penknife
so that I hadn't his spoon to wash, and his saucer was
clean. My heart swelled in gratitude to them all."
Later the children visit the village church and look at
the Beatitudes that were written on the walls. Guy picks
out "Blessed are the peacemakers" and makes Pan
blush furiously by saying that he thought of her when he
read that for he had noticed the way she butted in
between him and Marjorie when they looked like fighting.
The sayings are then turned into a joke by Marjorie for
she realises that neither she nor Guy could ever be
blessed as meek. The point about worthwhile behaviour is
made but not laboured.
Esme too breaks the rules,
putting her life into danger by climbing on the walls of
the castle. Again Guy attempts to sit in judgement but is
confounded when he hears Esme's reasons for her dangerous
venture and he finds himself apologising to her.
"I'm awfully sorry I was cross, Esme. As Pan
says, I was scared to death. Please forgive me and dry
up."
So, inevitably, the theme of the book is friendship and
the values and feelings that underpin it. In spite of the
quoted episodes Pan and Esme are already kind and
basically selfless individuals. Their lapses from the
high standards of the Clan (in each case for very
understandable reasons) make them likeable and credible
characters but less effective as examples than Marjorie.
Her transgressions are vivid and memorable. Lorna Hill
creates some magic moments. Take the time when Marjorie
plucks the new party dress she has been sent by her Aunt
Ursula out of the box and throws it onto the grass. Guy
confronts her.
"You pick it up or "
"All right !" Marjorie exclaimed. "I will
pick it up." She seized the bread knife the
one really sharp knife we possessed, barring the boys'
scout knives swooped down upon the frock, tossed
it into the air, and caught it upon the blade as it came
down. There was a rending hiss as the knife slit through
the silk stuff."
"Yippee !" she yelled, waving the frock wildly
round her head. "What price the White Ensign !"
Marjorie's has to atone for her fury by agreeing to lend
her dress to Judith so that she can be May Queen in a
glorious fashion. Guy also later forces her to do the
Latin preparation that she had hoped to avoid by running
away on holiday with them. Justice is done and seen to be
done and in an apposite and interesting manner.
There are also comic
interludes brought out most strongly through the
character of young Toby, who manages to deflate Marjorie
with well-chosen insults and wry comments. At one point
she complains about the midges,
"Gosh ! One's bitten me right on the end of my
nose !"
"Rotten luck !" Toby said. "For the midge,
I mean !"
The writer is also very adroit and amusing in her use of
small details to identify the differing characters of the
three girls. At one point Esme is discovered stirring her
tea with a hoof pick which was used only that morning to
clean Guy's pony's hoofs.
"I don't care," retorted Esme calmly,
continuing with her stirring. "I don't mind one bit.
After all, horses are terribly clean animals, aren't they
? They even smell lovely."
"But their hoofs !" I said with a shudder.
"You don't know what they walk on, Esme."
"I do !" Marjorie exclaimed, "They walk on
"
"Shut up, Marge !" ordered Guy. "We all
know what you're going to say, you disgusting girl!"
There is a sureness about the long
stretches of dialogue, particularly near the beginning of
the book, so that when the children argue, discuss and
reflect, you begin to know instinctively who is speaking
which line without having to look.
And as for the setting ?
Lorna Hill makes it seem both romantic and down-to-earth
at the same time. Pan's imagination can visualise the
Border warriors of long ago gathering in the castle
courtyard with their hooves clattering on the
cobblestones. Reality of life by the castle walls is
illustrated by the usually all-knowing Guy having chosen
to camp just where the waterspouts of the roofs and walls
dump their outflow whenever a storm breaks. The
excitement of rescuing a tiny lamb from an area of
bog-land is followed by the practical details of how to
get rid of the mud that has stuck to them in the process
of saving it. In the same way the author gives chapter
and verse about the food they buy and the meals that they
cook. The balance between what you want to know and what
you need to know is kept very well. In short, the
descriptions of landscape are brief but effective.
So, fifty years after it
was first written and published, "Castle in
Northumbria" still has, for me at least, qualities
which make it stand the test of time. More than anything
else it is rewarding to find that the characters are so
fresh, lively and engaging. Now let me subject them to
that "worthwhile test" I mentioned earlier.
Would I want to read about them again ? The answer is
"yes", for there are things which have been
left unresolved. For instance, Guy clearly likes all
three girls but will the relationships with any of them
ever go any further ? They don't need to, for a series
may stop where it wants to, but I believe that the reader
does need to be kept wondering. The possibilities need to
be kept open.
And, of course, what will
Marjorie do next ? Has she yet exhausted all the
different ways in which she can be so charmingly
obnoxious ? Will she grow up ? Being caught in the
tension of hoping she will and hoping she won't is
definitely one of the most effective hooks that Lorna
Hill puts into us. At a lower level Enid Blyton achieves
it with her abrasive George/Georgina figure in the first
four "Famous Five Stories"; at the highest
level L.M. Montgomery makes us yearn for the mischievous
Anne of the "Anne of Green Gables" story even
while we celebrate her maturity in her proposed union
with Gilbert at the end of "Anne of the
Island". The sense of Pan, the sensibility of Esme,
the loneliness of Judith, the snobbery of Sylvia Wade and
especially the sheer effrontery of Marjorie and the
domineering "rightness" of Guy are all
definitely worthy of another outing. #
COMMENTS
11/08/2010
Having read a review on the book I'm currently reading - Castle in Northumbria - I realised it's going to be very similar to the only other Lorna Hill I've read - It Was Through Patience. Both books are about children camping, both written in the first person, both have each child owning or having access to, a pony, all families have a chauffeur, and though I haven't reached the bits yet, both have children camping who have been expressly told by parents not to, and both have a girl going to the cinema to see a film she has been told not to. I thought Enid Blyton had a reputation for repetition, but I think these 2 Lorna Hills really take the biscuit.
Sarah
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